Wednesday, May 28, 2008
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
Sunday, May 25, 2008
Saturday, May 24, 2008
Why is this supernova different from all other supernova? Usually star death isn't detected until after the explosion (and release of light), but Dr. A.M. Soderberg had been observing a different supernova when she detected an unexpected burst of X-rays nearby. This flash of X-rays was the first hint that a star was about to die. Soderberg and colleagues were able to watch the new supernova explode.
Read more about this in the New York Times Science section, or see the abstract from Nature.
Friday, May 23, 2008
I'm wondering why I didn't see this sooner.
Probably/maybe/hopefully, I'll review Twisted on Write Brainers, my critique group's blog.
Thursday, May 22, 2008
Wednesday, May 21, 2008
1. List 3- 4 of your protagonist’s friends, family or followers.
2. List 2-3 reasons why your protagonist might quarrel with each.
3. Zero in on one of these scenarios.
a. Who started the fight?
b. How do things change if the other character starts the fight?
c. Why is the fight important? (stakes)
d. What does each character have to lose?
e. Are there hidden reasons for the fight? (Are the characters fighting about something trivial because they can’t/won’t verbalize the critical stuff?)
f. If so, how can you, as a writer, communicate the hidden, important stuff?
4. Write a scene describing the build up to the quarrel or fight. (The build up to a blow up may occur over many scenes, choose one.)
5. Write a scene describing the quarrel or fight.
6. Repeat 4 and 5 with:
a. The other character starting it, or
b. A major change in intensity (a quarrel becomes a fist fight or one character refuses to rise and stalks off in a huff, or laughs etc.) or
c. A different cause resulting in the same quarrel.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
In December 2006, an ice storm knocked out power for a chilly 48 hours, so now my neighborhood knows what to do. Within an hour of the power failure, everybody had their gas-powered generator fired up and connected to their refrigerators and sump pumps.
We had time on our hands. My younger son brought his acoustic guitar down to the living room to play for us. Later I heard my older son giving my younger son advice on his upcoming year in high school. My husband and I sat on the front porch, smelling the crab apple blossoms, speculating when the peony buds would open, and listening to the generators.
Then the power came back.
Maybe we do this more often.
Monday, May 19, 2008
My current WIP is a hefty 70,000 words. I realize that is not outrageous for a YA novel, but it will be a better manuscript when I've trimmed it to fighting weight. I've produced the quantity, I merely need to sift and winnow* for quality.
* I went to graduate school at the University of Wisconsin, Madison, home of the sifting and winnowing plaque. (I am not the young woman in the picture.)
Sunday, May 18, 2008
1. tending to compel; overpowering
2. having a powerful and irresistible effect; requiring acute admiration, attention, or respect
The word, compelling, is often applied to manuscripts. The discussion goes on to discuss strong characters, intelligent plots and unique voice. Yet the terms are still imprecise enough to include that moment of magic when a writer causes an "irresistible effect" on the reader to obtain his or her "acute admiration." There can be nothing wishy washy about acute admiration. It is an arrow to the heart, that causes the reader to fall in love with written words.
Thursday, May 15, 2008
At least they're going again. I need to cut A LOT. Perhaps I should keep a tally of words removed instead of words written.
Today I ordered Darcy Pattison's book, Novel Metamorphosis.
Wednesday, May 14, 2008
Monday, May 12, 2008
Lately, I haven't read a book that swept me away. I don't know if I'm cranky, or if my library-shelf-perusal-time has been rushed. I wanted to find a stellar book to review on Write Brainers. No luck, so far. I'll have to keep searching. (tough job, but somebody has to do it)
Paula Payton introduced me to a cool website for keeping track of books. Goodreads can be used to record and/or review books, or to hold book discussions with a group. I'm part of a book discussion group from SCBWI-MI, although, I'm not sure I'll take time to post additional opinions of our books of the month. The site does keep an orderly list of the books I've read. It also displays cover art which a simple Excel file wouldn't do.
I haven't encountered a lightning moment, but I've enjoyed many small flashes of insight. Lightning bugs? I hope, someday, the total lumens will add up to a revised novel.
I'm about to pull up my socks and submit the first two chapters of my work-in-progress for a paid critique at the SCBWI-MI spring conference.
Paid critiques at conferences are awarded by lottery. Statistically speaking, the chances of me getting one are small. There are 8 slots for one-on-one critiques, and about 150 people will attend the conference. Here is where the math gets blurry. I don't know how many of the 150 would want a critique, and how many are ineligible because they received a critique at last fall's conference. Still, what do I have to lose?
Sunday, May 11, 2008
Ruth McNally Barshaw drew this cartoon of me after Debbie Diesen's book reception for The Pout Pout Fish when my critique group met for lunch.
Five links in one sentence - not bad.
To see more of Ruth's art, check out her book, Ellie McDoodle, Have Pen Will Travel.
And her upcoming book, Ellie McDoodle, New Kid in School.
Both books are from Bloomsbury.
Saturday, May 10, 2008
Friday, May 9, 2008
Scientists have detected protein sequences from a 68 million year old Tyrannosaurus rex fossil. Like wow! Until last week, I would have said it was impossible.
Let me explain why this is so cool.
1. 68 million years is such a long time, it’s hard to contemplate.
2. Proteins generally don’t last long because organic materials decay. This is a giant soup bone that has been in the back of the fridge for millions of years.
3. Fossils form when minerals replace the components of bone, so nearly all fossils are preserved bones. Sometimes paleontologists find the impressions of hair, feathers or organs, but the actual tissue is long gone.
4. Collagen, the protein they managed to extract, is usually not preserved. Think about a human skull. Where is the nose? Noses are made of collagen, so they don’t fossilize. Tweak your nose. It bends because the inner structure is made of collagen.
5. The collagen they did extract was from the center of the femur (thigh bone). Scientists speculate that this T. rex was preserved in an oxygen-free environment which prevented the decay of some soft tissue.
The peptide sequences from T. rex were compared to similar peptides from living animals. More similarities were found between T. rex and living birds (chickens and ostriches) than between T.rex and alligators. This provides further evidence that living birds are derived from theropods (bipedal, meat-eating dinosaurs).
The New York Times science article can be seen here.
The scientific paper is:
C.L. Organ, M.H. Schweitzer, W. Zheng, L.M. Freimark, L.C. Cantly and J.M Asara, Molecular Phylogenetics of Mastodon and Tyrannosaurus rex, Science, 320: 499 (2008).
Wednesday, May 7, 2008
Tuesday, May 6, 2008
Monday, May 5, 2008
Sunday, May 4, 2008
Saturday, May 3, 2008
The Pout Pout Fish was published by Farrar Straus Giroux in 2008.
Friday, May 2, 2008
My new revision idea isn't working. The concept looked pretty from a distance, but when I got close, I discovered it stinks. Thus, the skunk cabbage. What I need now is a better idea, a lightning moment, a flash of clarity. My husband says, "Sometimes you have to bang your head on something for a long time before you start to see lights." Bang. Bang. Bang.
On a lighter note, the center of the cabbage depicts a Fibonacci sequence. (Look at the diagrams at the right of the link.)