Saturday, March 29, 2014
More Amaryllis
We liked our last amaryllis so much that I bought a
set of three bulbs when the orange one faded. The instructions said if I
planted the bulbs together in a twelve-inch pot, they would produce a “tapestry
of color.” That’s not going to happen. They’re blooming one at a time, which
gives us a longer time with flowers – just no tapestry. The first one to open
was a variegated raspberry and white.
Friday, March 28, 2014
Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Creativity vs. Craft
At
a recent book event, my husband asked the author which part of her writing
process was creativity and which part was craft. The poor woman looked startled
then said the two were so intertwined that they could not be separated.
In
science, creativity and craft are more easily distinguishable. The creative
parts involve identifying interesting problems and figuring out which questions
to ask so that a correct answer can be found. Craft comes into play when executing
the experiment. Years of practice are often required to produce interpretable
results.
For
me, writing is a mixture of creativity and craft. Figuring out what story to
write, deducing the best way to tell it, and asking probing questions about my
characters and their quests are all creative endeavors. The process of getting
the story down for the first time is mostly unbridled creativity. Revision,
however, is not exclusively craft. Seemingly, years of practice are often
required to produce a clearly written manuscript. But a manuscript that is merely
technically adept will not sell. Readers are looking for heart in a novel, characters
they can identify with, and situations that are both real and unique. Breathing
life into the novel is the creative part of revisions.
Sunday, March 23, 2014
First Signs of Spring
I've spotted a few red-winged blackbirds, the chipmunks have been sunning themselves on the front steps, and the snow has started to melt. Today, my husband noticed green shoots in the backyard. Last fall I planted bulbs. In an attempt to thwart our abundant burrowing creatures, I covered most of the bulbs with hardware cloth. Apparently my strategy worked because the ipheion were sprouting through the hardware cloth. Today, although the temperature is 21oF and much of the yard is still under snow, I started gardening. I removed all of hardware cloth I could find. (Some is still buried under snow.) The ipheion are coming up like gangbusters, the anemones have pink shoots, and the chionodoxa are sprouting. I saw no signs yet of the scilla or the bluebells, but the snowdrops are blooming.
Friday, March 21, 2014
Friday, March 14, 2014
Wednesday, March 12, 2014
Contrasts
I was in San Diego a couple weeks ago.
Those are raindrops, in case you've forgotten what they look like.
Bird of paradise plants grow like weeds in Southern CA.
through a rain-spotted window
the view out my window today
Tuesday, March 11, 2014
Mark Your Calendars
The lives of
most characters revolve around the school/work week or the seasons – depending on
the genre. I like to use a calendar as a revision tool. I draw a grid and label
it with the days of the week and the names of the months, scaling it to the
time span of my novel. I note major plot events on the appropriate spaces.
In my
current project, timing is particularly important because my protagonist is a
potter. My initial estimates of the time required to throw, dry, fire, glaze
and re-fire pottery were too short. After I adjusted the pottery schedule, I
noticed other time-related issues. Some events happened too quickly, while
others were unrealistically delayed.
A calendar
provides a simplified view of a novel on a single page. I can trace the narrative
arc without getting bogged down in details. A calendar is also a useful tool
for tracking pacing. I can easily see how many events happen on a given day and
how much time elapses between events.
Friday, March 7, 2014
Thursday, March 6, 2014
Recalcitrant Chapters
Some
chapters fight back. They induce procrastination, or stall repeatedly. Some
chapters insist on being boring, or they steer the novel off course. Some
chapters get worse with every revision.
It
happens to everyone, and the reasons are plentiful.
- Nothing is happening in the chapter.
- Too much is happening in the chapter.
- The subject is painful for the writer or close to a difficult memory.
- The chapter actually belongs in another book.
- The writer doesn’t yet understand what the chapter is supposed to achieve.
My
solution is adapted from a technique we used in the lab when experiments didn’t
work.
Figure out three ways to fix it, and try them all.
- Brainstorm until you come up with three completely different approaches to the chapter.
- Outline all of them. (Forget the Roman numerals and indentations. Simply make a list of events and note character emotions and changes.)
- Compare the pros and cons of each approach within the milieu of the novel.
- Write the one you like best.
- If it still doesn’t work, try another approach you’ve outlined.
This
is my world right now. Welcome to Chapter 11.
Saturday, March 1, 2014
A Different View of Rejection
We’re
in San Diego so my husband can attend an editorial meeting for a scientific
journal. We met another editor in the lobby of the hotel. This man looks just
like Santa Claus, except that he doesn’t always wear red. He’s also smart and
funny like I imagine Santa would be.
We
can, perhaps, all agree that many manuscripts are submitted before they’re
ready, and part of the job of any editor is to reject submissions. This morning, Santa told us that at a previous
meeting, he was accused of being mean because he’d rejected the largest
percentage of submissions of all the editors.
Rejection is difficult for everyone – even Santa.
Rejection is difficult for everyone – even Santa.
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