tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5037395117572651907.post2747174873127090005..comments2023-06-12T12:06:00.232-04:00Comments on Words and Pixels: Purposeful DraftsAnn Finkelsteinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01505478203827894237noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5037395117572651907.post-10560461387560078552011-11-02T19:33:49.336-04:002011-11-02T19:33:49.336-04:00That's a new concept for me! I was probably gr...That's a new concept for me! I was probably groping my way toward it, but thanks for putting it succinctly. My current draft has a purpose I call "condensing." If I can make the timeline work, I'll have Sandborn and Hammer show up before the trek. Currently I can't see how that will be as impactful as their arrival after dark in the mountains. But it will let me interweave exposition with action much more than just plunking it down around the campfire.TimInMichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10004213142269007247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5037395117572651907.post-4531499423525201092011-11-02T16:48:08.880-04:002011-11-02T16:48:08.880-04:00That's great advice Ann. After revising a zill...That's great advice Ann. After revising a zillion times, my revisions did start focusing on specific aspects of the manuscript that needed work. And it did work.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.com